Saturday, April 28, 2012

Y~ Yellow





Coward yoke runs --
Midnight hides feeble secrets
sworn hot summer nights.






This post is part of the A-Z Challenge 2012.

16 comments:

  1. A lot written into so few words. Well done.

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  2. Those hot summer nights...lots of secrets, I imagine.
    OR...an egg over-easy at midnight eaten in hiding on a smoldering summer night. HA HAHA...crackin' myself up here.

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    1. Cracking me up too. It is meant to be multiple meanings... though I'm not sure it translates that well ;-)

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  3. Now that is a thought provoking few words!! ♥

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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    1. smiles yes, it is Kathy, and fun that you see that :-)

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  4. I love how a title can change your perception of a poem, and vice versa

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    1. It is fun for me too. The many meanings of words used, and tucked away. Thank you for reading Janna.

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  5. Stop by www.widowsphere.blogspot.com to see the list of my 26 favorite blogs from the challenge. Yours is on it.

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    1. Oh thank you Thelma... that is really sweet of you!

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  6. Multi-layered and full of mystery... I like it!

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    1. Thank you Michelle. It is intended to be so, and I love it when someone reads it that way. :-)

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  7. Oh wow-- a great take on Yellow. I find it steamy!!

    Cheers, Jenn

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