Haiku For You
Love the impression of light-hearted conflict, as a "playful" breeze clashes with and dominates over the sun which battles to warm her cooling skin...
I enjoy your comments Michelle, they are sometimes more poetic than the poem you are responding to. Have a beautiful weekend!
Beautiful! Your Haiku creates an image of early spring just as green life is beginning to sprout forth. It's like you can see the almost barren landscape just starting to become warmed with all of the new plant life reaching up to touch the sun's rays.
Tracy, you have a wonderful way with words. Delights me to see your comments. Thank you for enjoying it with me.
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